Hi there magic brothers. I am working on my new promo. It is still not open to the public since it is work in progress. Care to give me some tips what can I improve?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Uc64u4xfrE&feature=youtu.be

I already bought this track so there will be no hologram in the background. Also there will be some contact information as well at the very end. ;-)

Cheers!

From a purely personal perspective:
Looks good, jazzy catchy soundtrack.
Constructive thoughts:
- Some clips are too short e.g. the flash paper reveal of the bubbles at 10 seconds could do with another second or two so the viewer can actually see what is appearing, rather than a vague red cylinder.
- Consider a few reaction shots of people.
Nice work though.
Charlie

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