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JoeJoe
Inner circle
Myrtle Beach
1506 Posts
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Posted: Feb 27, 2012 3:24pm
New promo stuff ... about to convert everything into my "As Seen on TV Show", including full website make-over:
They can be found on my new Facebook Page if you want to like/share them:
http://www.facebook.com/AmazingJoeJoe
-JoeJoe
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MickNZ
Veteran user
Auckland, New Zealand
374 Posts
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Posted: Mar 12, 2012 6:58am
Suggest you take the space out of the URL. Capitalise the first letters of the words if that improves legibility.
Auckland Magician Mick Peck, New Zealand
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Aaron Smith Magic
Inner circle
Portland, OR
1190 Posts
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Posted: Mar 12, 2012 6:21pm
MickNZ has some great points. To me, it looks as if you created a meme, and it lacks "feng shui". I would consider a different font, and lay it out a little differently. And don't be afraid to use different fonts and different colors. I would remove the "capsule" looking border from around your URL, and definitely remove the space. Here's my postcard, while I am sure is not perfect, maybe it will help you see what I am talking about. Good luck my friend!
http://i919.photobucket.com/albums/ad31/aaronsmithmagic/postcardside1-001.jpg
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theamazingryan
New user
92 Posts
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Posted: Mar 13, 2012 1:34am
Hah this is hilarious, the typography is god awful though. Send me a PM and I'll rework the text for you if you like. I have graphic design experience.
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Aaron Smith Magic
Inner circle
Portland, OR
1190 Posts
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Posted: Mar 13, 2012 4:50pm
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On 2012-03-13 01:34, theamazingryan wrote:
Hah this is hilarious, the typography is god awful though.
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Really? Could you possibly be any more obtuse?
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theamazingryan
New user
92 Posts
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Posted: Mar 14, 2012 5:04am
You mean frank. I thought the joke was really good and like everyone else in this thread, including you, I thought the typography wasn't great. If your problem with my comment is that it sounds insensitive, I would argue that it's more insensitive pandering to ego than offering a practical suggestion.
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