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Topic: LG Commercial I Made
Message: Posted by: Clock (Oct 15, 2007 03:33PM)
Tell me what you think! Takes about two minutes to fully load. Written, shot, and edited by me and a close friend.

http://www.cardenfilms.com/lgnet.mov
Message: Posted by: Vince_the_vince (Oct 15, 2007 04:43PM)
Awesome...I really like the girl..the add is cool to watch.....
Message: Posted by: The Drake (Oct 15, 2007 06:10PM)
I thought it was all well done but didn't get the deal with what got tossed into the car at the end. Was it the note or possibly panties?

Best,

Tim
Message: Posted by: Clock (Oct 15, 2007 06:38PM)
Paper airplane with their number. I'm not sure what to do to make that more clear. If I have a shot of the girls writing the number it kind of dilutes the ending.
Message: Posted by: The Drake (Oct 15, 2007 06:57PM)
Firstly... I have to say that the entire commercial looks really pro. I did loose the message regards the plane however. Maybe have the paper plane glide a little slower and tip a bit so its more recognizable? Maybe a quick shot of her hand releasing the plane seconds before the plane is seen gliding between cars? Maybe a quick shot of the plane ( from the guys point of view ) headed toward him before its seen gliding?

Just some quick thoughts. I'm sure you'll think of something. LOL Sort of reminds me of Chaplins problem from City Lights. Are you familiar with that?

Best,

Tim
Message: Posted by: The Drake (Oct 15, 2007 07:31PM)
Hi Clock,

Just watched it again. I noticed this time that the guy made a plane himself first but it wasn't really clearly show beyond the beginnings of the first folds. If it was more clear that he made a plane then it might be a more natural assumption that it was a plane that was returned.

Now sure what censors would think of it but the panties would really get the message of the commercial across better. LOL

Best,

Tim
Message: Posted by: BalukMagic (Oct 20, 2007 09:12PM)
Very good work.

Just curious. Is "Life's good when you take chances." the actual slogan for LG? If so, it seems kinda weird; as if it were suggesting LG is, to the purchaser, very cheap and we should just try it for the hell of it.
Message: Posted by: michaelmystic2003 (Oct 20, 2007 09:35PM)
LOL Mark!