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Topic: A Poem I wrote :)
Message: Posted by: KyleMacNeill (Aug 11, 2011 11:49AM)
Hey guys,

I am 14 and love poetry, writing and funnily enough: MAGIC! :)
Anyway, I tried my hand at writing a poem today, so here it is.
I hope you enjoy!

Forest Folklore by Kyle MacNeill



As the forestís shy mist gently cleared,

It reveals the waterpool that is greatly feared.

Feared of wielding an ancient curse,

That inflicts pain until the hearse.



But an innocent animal knows not of that,

Hence he saunters helpless, nimble as a rat.

To the forbidden land of ancient tales,

Where an eerie chaos then entails.



The animals gather and spot the intruder,

Lodged in the forlorn and deathly brooder.

As he dips his sleek head into the springs,

The trees smile and the moon sings.



For the ancient folklore is much mistaken,

For the first time the animals properly waken,

As they realize the potential of this sweet nectar,

A carrier of magic; an enchanted vector.



As they then lap up the spiritual juice,

The feel powerful; much like Zeus.

Then whilst the sun rises, their magical power,

Flourishes at once: a prominent flower.
Message: Posted by: critter (Aug 11, 2011 12:00PM)
I like it!
Message: Posted by: KyleMacNeill (Aug 11, 2011 12:07PM)
Thanks!
Message: Posted by: KyleMacNeill (Aug 11, 2011 01:32PM)
It is kinda weird, but I'm glad you like it!
Message: Posted by: stoneunhinged (Aug 11, 2011 01:35PM)
I like it too.
Message: Posted by: KyleMacNeill (Aug 11, 2011 01:59PM)
Thanks!