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Topic: What do you think?
Message: Posted by: ZachDavenport (Jul 15, 2015 02:38PM)
This is a routine that I put together, and I would appreciate some criticism. Here is the link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=el_lEmBlc_I&feature=youtu.be thanks in advance.
Message: Posted by: bobandjim (Jul 15, 2015 05:50PM)
Hey Zach,

I'm intrigued by this routine. I like the variety of effects that you are able to pull off. I think that is probably the strongest feature of the routine, the amount of different things that happen.

The patter is a good start, and I"m sure the more you perform it, the more good lines you will develop.

The only phase I think is particularly weak is when the coins won't stick together. It seems really strange the way your hands stay together so long. You could do a click pass to simulate putting both coins in your hand and the chinese coin keeps jumping out to your other hand instead. You could do it two or three times to play for laughs. Then you can decide that they will only stick together if they both are silver and do your amazing change of the chinese coin to the silver behind the other silver one. I loved that move!
Message: Posted by: daniel116 (Jul 15, 2015 06:33PM)
Overall you've got a very intense routine with a lot of things happening, most of which are pretty visual and surprising.
I'd put additional thought into orginazing the routine so that each phase is significally "more magical" or "more impossible" than the last one, and in the end having a sort of jumbo-coin finale. Doesn't have to be a jumbo coin of course, but something completely out of the blue to really throw them away.
Also a lot of times through out the routine, the dirty hand is way suspicious.
You've got tons of great moves, all of which you make invisible, just try to watch the other-hand thing.
Well done.
Message: Posted by: ZachDavenport (Jul 15, 2015 07:39PM)
Thanks for the replies! After re-watching the video, I see what you mean about the hands staying together, and I think I've found a way around it. I'm designing this routine to go in the middle of 2 other tricks, so an extreme finale doesn't seem like it would fit well.
Message: Posted by: ZachDavenport (Jul 15, 2015 11:12PM)
I just made a slightly revised video, so here is the link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bE-Ur5WCX_0
Message: Posted by: funsway (Jul 16, 2015 05:32AM)
The concept of "affinity" is very acceptable to an audience and your presentation creates anticipations other than just a skill demonstration.

but, somehow, the desired "experience of real magic" seems lacking for me. Not sure why. "Surprise" is not magic. Maybe there is too much surprise and rather than awe and wonder.

Possibly it is the artificiality of the video perspective. Some may be the technical flaws of hand positions that will not be noticed except by magicians.

I am not trying to be over critical and wish to encourage you in your creative efforts.

For me, performance magic is a form of communications. How is your love of magic being communicated?

I will watch for other postings of your efforts.
Message: Posted by: ZachDavenport (Jul 16, 2015 11:30AM)
Thanks. And by all means, be overly critical. That's why I posted it in the first place.
Message: Posted by: bigfoot (Jul 16, 2015 03:37PM)
Hey good routine so far. I will add something try relaxing your hands more. If you watch the video you can see your hands are tense. A good case and point is when your hand is to your side. It is clear that your thumb is pressing against something. I'm sure it will come with time as trying to remember a new routine stops the "flow" aspect until you have down. I do have a patter idea that you might give a bit of thought to see if you can make it work. Quantum nonlocality or quantum intanglement I won't go any further because it is a fascinating subject and I would not want to deprive you of the research.
That is a good routine you've got going stick with it, it's looking better each time you post a video. :)