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Message: Posted by: serg (Jul 19, 2019 04:42PM)
Hello,Dear Magic Friends! Here is my new promo...sorry for the Russian language))) What you think about? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MqVZ0dD2zQ4
Message: Posted by: Dave Scribner (Jul 20, 2019 09:35AM)
Very nice. It's nice to see you included Berta as a partner and not just an assistant. She adds a lot to the promo.
Message: Posted by: serg (Jul 20, 2019 01:18PM)
Thank you very much,Dave ! Nice to hear))) But if there are shortcomings - we are also ready to listen and correct!
Message: Posted by: top_illusionist (Jul 21, 2019 04:39PM)
Good job Serg.

Your promo looks fantastic, but I would make it shorter and edit down to about 1 minute. If possible, get rid of the needle thru balloon, dove pan, floating dove, vanishing feather with flash paper, appearing knot on rope and the flower botania at the 1:28 mark.
Message: Posted by: Dave Scribner (Jul 21, 2019 05:40PM)
Serg, I would agree with top_illustionist. I'd shorten the promo and remove the needle thru balloon. It's really not a "knock my socks off" effect. I'd also remove the dove pan and vanishing feather in flash paper. You demonstrate the floating table several times so I'd reduce that down to just one. I'd use the one without a foulard. Also, rope effects are nice but again not really show stoppers. I disagree with removing the flower botania. People love color and splendor and the multiple bouqets are impressive.
Message: Posted by: serg (Jul 22, 2019 07:01PM)
Again, very many thanks Dave and top_illusionist for the advice !!! We will surely take into account the wishes, and we will change for the better)))