Sorry tony if you missunderstood, i´m happy about your advices.
english is not my native language , so it´s sometimes hard to express corectly what I mean, it was not my intention to answer negatively to your post.
i´m just a little upset about rabbits posts, they are not really constructive.
what I answered to your post was just MY opinnion , no less no more.
if you think it was a negativ answer than I apologize it was really not meant this way.
btw this routine is one of them I have to decide wich to do.

mario

I agree Tony. In my opinion in entertainment you need one of two things to happen. You need to make people laugh. Or you need a fast paced smack them in the mouth type entertainment. We also like to watch people fail. We like the car wrecks for some reason. I think it is why we like American Idol. It is funny to watch people act crazy and fail. It is entertaining/funny to see what Simon will say to them.

Munger, how is what I am sayingnot constructive.

The routine is toooo slow, you need to kick the audience in the gut and the head, right at the top of the program, if you don't do this -- you ship is sunk, especially when you only have a few minutes.

My advice, do something unique and visual. A chair routine is not the answer...

Mario:

Language can be misleading, and you do very well with English!
I stand by what I said on the performance and recording in my first post. It is the best way to streamline an act, or just see if the act will work.

Good luck.

Tony

it´s my intention to make it very quick not slow, maybe I even combine it with another routine.
as I said to tony, maybe language is the problem.
I thought to do a routine with many climaxes in a fast pace could be the right thing
for a competition, that´s all.
maybe i´m absolutly wrong, will see.
I can do a wellknown routine too but I think it´s better to be a little bit original

Let us know how it goes Munger. I hope you win!

Yes munger, best wishes!

Sure I let you know
the competition is at the end of may