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baal Regular user 104 Posts |
Hello, I've just started with marketing in magic. One of the part is 3 Fold Brochure. Could You tell me please what do You think about it. grammar etc...
front side(outside): http://i789.photobucket.com/albums/yy171......tka1.jpg back side(inside): http://i789.photobucket.com/albums/yy171......tka2.jpg ps. I the section "about Simon" - photo of the face its not any more red. in oryginal its change, but I have it in different file format so I cant upload it to photobucket. thanks for any help Simon |
pabloinus Inner circle 1681 Posts |
I can not open the inside.
On the Outside, for me as a potential reader of the brochure, I prefer to read vertically, rather than accross, also all the sections should be oriented on the same way, I don't like to rotate the page to read contact and then rotate again to continue reading. As a last comment, your presentation should be on the top, so when you open the brochure you start reading top left with your message. I don't have any experience on brochure making or marketing, these are just my view as a consumer. |
baal Regular user 104 Posts |
Any more help?:)
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Ben Train Inner circle Erdnase never had 4639 Posts |
I would get someone to proof-read the write-ups. Also, I learnt (learned? Learnt?) something new from reading that badmagicphotos blog: you have an image of you holding three coins and some jumbos, I assume for the most convoluted version of Three-fly ever created. But only a magician will recognize what is supposed to be happening in the effect. A potential client may not. Are you a coin collector who's proud of his wares? Do you have really, really small hands? What someone looking at the photo, who is unfamiliar with magic, think?
If it was a coin production, which I assume most non-magicians would guess, make that more clear. The same is true for the inner booklet. Holding thimbles isn't a sale pitch. Why not include a photo of you working? Or smiling? So, change the photos and get someone to look over the writing. I love you. Ben
If you're reading this you're my favourite magician.
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Futureal Inner circle 1695 Posts |
Your text is capitalized in weird places. "Magician", "Programmes" shouldn't be capitalized. Put two spaces at the end of sentences, not two. You've missed a line-break and a colon after "Stage".
That quote about illusions at the top of the page doesn't serve any purpose, put a testimonial there instead. |
baal Regular user 104 Posts |
Thanks very much for yours help
ps. I love you too Ben :* |
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