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blva888
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I will have pictures up when I can get some pictures taken of me.
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Regarding the photos you'll eventually put up, I'm a big fan of having one or two professional "studio" portraits taken and use those. Then make sure you get some performance photos as soon as you can. It will show people that you really actually do this, and it isn't just a glorified hobby.
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I love the multi-color UNGAWA MAGIC logo and the tagline underneath.

However to make it pop and to fit in with family-friendly I suggest an all-white background. Look at what GOOGLE usually does w/ their logo... it isn't dissimilar.

I would lose the pink on the bunny and I would lose the blue rectangular background on the navigation buttons. Red and blue for the navigation buttons themselves looks good and on a white background they will pop. And I like the buttons unconventional shape. White for the lettering there is good.

If you change your background to white, your tag-line and all other body text would need to be black.

I would use mixed-case on the page titles in the right pane. "Contact Us" instead of "CONTACT US". All caps looks too abbrasive. I would not have the title HOME at all on your home page.

The font for your tagline doesn't seem to scale small very well although it looks great on your UNGAWA MAGIC. You might consider a more standard font for that part.

I would lose the table borders under SERVICES.

The UNGAWA FAQ has no Q just an A. You have way too long an explanation for that first answer. It is confusing. You say he and she without it being clear who he and she are. Keep it simple like...

"Ungawa is the magic word that Brent uses in his show. When the children yell Ungawa, something magical always seems to happen.

Umgawa is a word Brent remembers from TV shows like Scooby-Do and George of the Jungle as well as old Tarzan movies."
blva888
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Things have changed dramatically. The FaQ's page has changed a little. I've added more Questions to shorten the long answers I gave.

TheRaven thank you for your response. I have never seen the tarzan movie nor the scooby doo episode, so I can't put I remember them from when I watched it.
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