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Akonn New user Czech Republic 34 Posts |
Hello guys,
I would like to hear your opinion on my version of Five Speed. I thought I have made my best, but tell me everything. What would you like to change on my performance and etc.. Because I want to be still better I have to hear true. Thank you a lot guys!! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U4qIeZR3ERc ---------------------------------------------- If you are interest this is Documentary - street magic in Czech republic. Hope you enjoy. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=px5Zi2FrYHs ---------------------------------------------- |
Andrew Eng New user 50 Posts |
For the ambitious Ace of Spade part, I feel that you need to pause a little after you place the ace in the center to let people absorb what just happened. Its just like putting a coin in your hand, pause awhile, and then reveal to show your hands empty. Other than that its quite well done =)
-Andrew
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Voldemort Special user Florida 562 Posts |
Just one suggestion... Try to think up a good patter to go along with the effect instead of music. For example, What would you be saying for real people when you perform this for them? I think that this is one of those effects that can be confusing without patter. Especially in the last phase and especially on video.
But it was a great performance! I really liked it and it flowed nicely.
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Zhang Special user 515 Posts |
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On 2010-05-29 10:05, Voldemort wrote: Can you just say I changed my mind, and not let me hanging the way you did, Yes I'm talking to you Voldemort. |
ejohn Special user Atlanta 723 Posts |
Nicely done! Beautiful music.
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Voldemort Special user Florida 562 Posts |
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On 2010-05-29 10:16, Zhang wrote: Uhhhh... What?
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Vlad_77 Inner circle The Netherlands 5829 Posts |
Voldemort, EXCELLENT advice, and I am just as perplexed as you by Zhang's post.
Akonn, NICE approach to Larry Jennings's Ambitious Classic! Well done! I do think that patter would help. There were a few points where I could see a spectator not quite certain of what is supposed to be happening. I, like others, do think the music is beautiful, although as a musician, I think that your tempo does not QUITE fit the feel of the music, but that is more of a musician observation. But, apart from that little bit of constructive criticism, I really like you approach to the Jennings plot a LOT. Ahimsa, Vlad |
CardWiz Special user Charleston, SC 626 Posts |
If you are going to use that music go slower and make it simpler. Its like watching a fight scene from The Matrix with classical music....they don't match each other.
If you did this on the street you would blow people away with this. CW
People have been calling me "Yu" lately. I don't know, must be Chinese.
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Akonn New user Czech Republic 34 Posts |
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On 2010-05-29 10:05, Voldemort wrote: Thank you for your suggestion. I know what you mean. I have never tried this one on the street yet. I will think about what I am going say. |
Akonn New user Czech Republic 34 Posts |
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On 2010-05-29 12:12, CardWiz wrote: Thank you for your opinion. I could go slower. It is true but I think watching fight scene with classical music is awesome..Its something new and I really like it. I have see few movie with this type and It was awesome..maybe just for me.. |
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