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jacob garr New user Independence Mo. 17 Posts |
I am entering a corpse bride contest and I would like you to go to my website and take the link to vote for my poem about the corpse bride, please try to rate it good,thank you, you can click my username to see my website link, thank you!
visit my website at- http://home.comcast.net/~crazyjake-writing/JacobGarr-Magician.html
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Chrystal Inner circle Canada/France 1552 Posts |
Hi Jacob,
Okay I voted and I'm impressed with your creative poetry! You're only 13? Wow! Well done! All I want in return is your first born, okay? Sending best wishes and good luck your way in regards to the contest! I only have one suggestion as first impressions count. On the front of your website, you should change the i's to capitals. Now don't leave a dead rat on my lawn as a result as I'm only thinking of your best interest at heart. Chrystal |
Cory Gallupe Inner circle Nova Scotia, Canada 1272 Posts |
I cant find the poem. I got a few tips for your site. I am assuming that it is a free domain thing, like the ever annoying piczo. (I have piczo, and I hate it. I will be getting a domain soon.) I don't know exactly what the site is for. I am guessing that it is just for your friends to look at, and if that's the case, then its ok. Your friends might find it boring, and not even look at it considering it is rather plain, but its ok. BUT, if it is promoting something. (I can tell its not promoting your magic, but it may be promoting your poetry. But, like I said, I didn't see your poem, so I don't know if your a pro or not.) But if it is promoting you or something you do, and other people will be seing it, I suggest that you use proper grammar, have some well done pictures, make it more easy to navigate through, and make it interesting to look at. If you would like some proffesional help, go on the "A tangled web we weave" forum. There are lots of people there that will be more than happy to help you. Actually, there is a proffesional site designer there designing sites for free. BUT, You would have to buy a domain after in my understanding. Take a look at it. talk to him, because I don't know a lot aboput it. Also, check out my site, and take some notes. Now, Im no pro, my sit eis not the best either, and I know Ive got some things to fix and there ares ome problems on it. But it should give you a rough idea as to what to do. But, if you like your site as it is, that's ok. Im not harping on you, just if you would like to make it more interesting, I am pointing you in (Hopefully) the right direction. So, anyways, enough with the site, lets see that poetry. Tell me where it is, I cant seem to find it. -Cory.
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