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Peter Loughran![]() V.I.P. Ontario, Canada 2683 Posts ![]() |
A million times better!!!
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Majestic12![]() Special user Maryland 643 Posts ![]() |
Looking great lil_magic! Keep it up, all the little touches add up..!
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w_s_anderson![]() Inner circle The United States 1222 Posts ![]() |
Holy ****....that's the same act?! That was far superior to your first video. Very entertaining! I think you may need to smooth out the "transition" for the AGT producers to accept it, but it looks great. That was a dramatic improvement in a very short time, which is also quite impressive.
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Micheal Leath![]() Inner circle 1046 Posts ![]() |
Much better! Have you thought about maybe somehow shortening the height of the curtain so it isn't dragging the ground so much? I know you probably do want it to drag a little bit, but maybe not so much. Also do you think it may make it a little better if you were not looking down at what is happening as much? It's just an idea. I could be wrong. I do think that you did a much better job this time though.
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The Mirror Images![]() Inner circle Michigan/USA 1980 Posts ![]() |
WOW!!! Ok you rock for several reasons. You listened to us and took those comments and made your routine rock.
Here are some more suggestions that will make this ROCK even more! Beginning: - Work on that opening. Lossen up a bit. Relax. You look a little tense. The board: - Add color to the shirt as well. So people can tell what is moving. Once you do this on stage those two lines are not there. Splitting of the body: - Much better then before. Great work. Keep working at it and you will make this look like you can do it in your sleep. Coming back together: - Smooth it out a bit. But great work Ending: - Was very cheesy. Think of adding something that has a more bam effect to it and make it work with the music. Keep it up. Gotta love the Café for this awesome help. Best,
Steven and Michael, The Mirror Images
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Christopher Lyle![]() Inner circle Dallas, Texas 5698 Posts ![]() |
MUCH BETTER!!!! Good luck!
Christopher
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Paulo Cabrita![]() Special user 818 Posts ![]() |
Very good.
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aboycemagic![]() Regular user New York 153 Posts ![]() |
Great Job lil magic, Mirror Images has it all right
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jimbomona![]() New user 29 Posts ![]() |
Pretty *** good man!
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Lou Cirulli![]() Special user 587 Posts ![]() |
Now I wanna get this thing! =)
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Matt Adams![]() Special user Harvest, AL 827 Posts ![]() |
I missed the first version so I'm looking at this new version with fresh eyes. It was just ok, but not awesome. It seemed that you just "did a trick" and that you weren't really into it. You may think about over-dramatizing your facial expressions so we can see real surprise when you separate your legs. Perhaps a "double-take" in that you are surprised to see it work. Just a thought. In any case, it just felt like you were either nervous or bored, but neither of these would be desirous. For a supreme example of facial expressions and surprise check out Jason Latimer's Cups and Balls routine.
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