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KyleMacNeill
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Hey guys,

I am 14 and love poetry, writing and funnily enough: MAGIC! Smile
Anyway, I tried my hand at writing a poem today, so here it is.
I hope you enjoy!

Forest Folklore by Kyle MacNeill



As the forest’s shy mist gently cleared,

It reveals the waterpool that is greatly feared.

Feared of wielding an ancient curse,

That inflicts pain until the hearse.



But an innocent animal knows not of that,

Hence he saunters helpless, nimble as a rat.

To the forbidden land of ancient tales,

Where an eerie chaos then entails.



The animals gather and spot the intruder,

Lodged in the forlorn and deathly brooder.

As he dips his sleek head into the springs,

The trees smile and the moon sings.



For the ancient folklore is much mistaken,

For the first time the animals properly waken,

As they realize the potential of this sweet nectar,

A carrier of magic; an enchanted vector.



As they then lap up the spiritual juice,

The feel powerful; much like Zeus.

Then whilst the sun rises, their magical power,

Flourishes at once: a prominent flower.
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I like it!
"The fool is one who doesn't know what you have just found out."
~Will Rogers


"This I offer in explanation of how it was that I found myself in my undergarments as I sat in my cell attempting to plot my escape."
~Professor Phineas Valeyard, Miskatonic University Dept.of Psychodynamic Natural History.

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Thanks!
KyleMacNeill
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It is kinda weird, but I'm glad you like it!
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I like it too.
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Thanks!
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