On 2011-09-03 10:11, Mb217 wrote:
Yes really nice li, and welcome to the Caf�.

It looks good but notice the responses you get here, one, two and few words...Just imagine if those were all the claps of applause you got, you wouldn't have many for such good work. You certainly have good chops but it's done so much like Ponta The Smith that it's like watching Ponta just with your face showing. It's good work and well routined but now let's work on developing who YOU are in it. It might be a bit challenging at first, as you have layered yourself with the way, nuances, finesses that is Ponta, just like in America people mimicked David Roth's every move in his effects, right down to his saying most times, "...That's a half dollar, a silver coin, a fifty cent piece."

Keep working but don't work so much toward (directly or indirectly) showing yourself as the next Ponta but more importantly as the first xingchi li.

Again good work, welcome and keep moving forward.