For the last couple of days I have been writing and rewriting a new script.

Anyone who would like to take a look at it, and give me some feedback/suggestions, please send me a pm with your email or write me at

Harris.deutsch@leesummit.k12.mo.us

Thanks in advance

Harris
laughologist and fishers of men of kansas city
http://magician.org/member/doctoroflaughology

After several "re-writes", I gave the script to a trusted friend with a background in writing, acting and directing Christian Theatre groups. Her suggestions were great.

Harris

Anyone who would like a copy of this script on Daniel, send me an email to
Harris.deutsch@leesummit.k12.mo.us

On a side note (F minor 7) is there a place on the website to post items for members to use?

Harris

I just posted the script on the FCM members Forum area under Ventriloquist.

Harris

I went back to look at the post on the FCM and found the script form was replaced by paragraph form. This makes reading and understanding the flo a bit difficult.

Can anyone make any suggestions on how to get it to maintain the correct format..

Harris: speaks
Nigel: speaks
Harris
etc., etc.etc..

Thanks in advance.

love brother Harris

Went back again to the FCM forum and divided the lines by "hand", and reposted.

The easier read script follows the original one in "paragraph form".

http://fcm.org/member_area/forum_details.php?parentid=434

you probably will have to log in as a member 1st.

Harris